The story so far...
Mini-storylines and standalone strips. These are comics that follow the main story, but don't really fit into one of the larger storylines.
, 20 weeks 20 hr ago
Yeah, see... Kieran knows some form of martial arts... one of those ones where they can kill you by looking at you. You have to watch how you touch the guy, cause soon as his reflexes kick in, you're on the floor clutching yourself in pain. Really should've seen that coming, I guess.
I am super proud of how that top panel turned out. So much so that I did a quick and dirty desktop wallpaper of it. BAM!
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Good variation of panels. Your story telling is improving from when you first started. For more ideas on panel techniques I suggest “Wally Wood’s 22 Panels That Always Work.”
http://joeljohnson.com/images2/wallywood22panel1600.jpg
Good luck with your sequential art.
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Melissa, 19 weeks 4 days ago
It's in the middle panel of the middle panel when Jelly's eyes become mere dots that you really know he's in for it.